Breathlessness

 

Soul-moving, Heart-touching fabrics
of a canvas-like Existence
forming vacuum bubbles of Absoluteness.

Breathless

Life resurrected into quantum pieces
Taking Breaths; Raining Selflessness
Shocking to Awareness,
forming to Feel.

Forming to Live

Breathing to Understand;
being Breathless to Allow self
to Live a Life
IN Understanding

 

of a painted

cried out

Purpose

 

Alliviate "Me"

Watch it Unfold

In Breathlessness

of its vast structure

 

Through the Realization..

 

that there is none..

 

 

~ Skye ~

Author's Note

I hope it triggers and moves your minds; to understand the point and place it moves you to.

Reviews

[Dani California]

"of a painted
cried out
Purpose

Alliviate "Me"
Watch it Unfold
In Breathlessness
of its vast structure

Through the Realization..

that there is none.."


This is a perfect piece to present for discussion in an interpretation class. Wow.
I was all over the universe with this one... and am still out there.... seeking a non
existent purpose to it all. I copied the last few stanzas, but truly this entire write is
excellent. Very thought provoking, creative work..! When I return from my travel
to find...something, .... if I return.... I hope to bring back with me an answer which
will make it a little easier to breathe.

Outstanding write!

[Elvina CZq]

This poem gives me the idea on how the universe moves, and yes, it does trigger my mind. I understand every word you've written here, but I just couldn't put it into words, or in another way of saying, I might able to tell you what I know about this in Chinese, but I have a little problem of translating it. lol. By the by, what you've written really making me breathless. Wonderful :)

[Pax Analog]

Cilla turned me on to this poem, and I see why.

Pure awareness attunement. This is what Zen and Tao and Advaita point to, but no labels needed. All the so-termed Consciousness traditions just provide clues for the peculiar human species to be wise instruments of transcendence.

Beautiful accompanying image, beautiful focus. I lean toward AS over IN, but you invite this close scrutiny. IN is still good, tho'. "Alleviate" is spelled w/an "e" (unless one is assaying a Joycean pun, all-live-i-ate). I had to get that out of the way, because this poem is precise intuition.

"Watch it Unfold/In Breathlessness/of its vast structure/Through the Realization../that there is none.."

Form and Formlessness are ONE.

Exquisite contemplation.

[cilla]

I visit your poetry often and I am never disappointed. Your work simply sparkles and opens doors to a thought provoking and beautiful place.

In a recent discussion I had with a friend, he had said, "His words are beautiful but meaningless." I had to think about that for a bit but finally responded by saying, "Writers write but it is the readers who give meaning to the words." And so it is with your work and I often wonder why more people don't leave comments for you � of course, I wonder the same about my own but that has never been a measure of success.

So, without delving into the complexities of "meaning", let me simply say � your work is aesthetically breathtaking � passionate � ethereal � and the world is a better place with you in it.

Hugs
Cilla

[Michael X]

your words have a powerful effect and leave my head swimming in the expression, the title speaks valumes
and that is sorare to find, Iloved this because the idea epitomizes the concept with captivating reasoning, force, flow,detail, passion,form over substance, like mind over matter, you take control and keep the reader hooked, what struckme mostis the subtle beauty, the formula, context in design, which in many
ways reflects what word sculpting is all about, also,there is a wiseness that leaves the heart feeling
knowledge and wiser for having read your words

Breathing to Understand;
being Breathless to Allow self
to Live a Life
IN Understanding

[Touché Armada]

I have missed you.
The tactile fabrics of life, namely skin.. Though when you shop for clothes do you find yourself petting and gliding your hand over everything? Because what ever you wind up to be wearing it should feel nice to touch as it would be bare skin, even though its not possible, it should be as close as possible.

I have always loved the way you write.

Alleviate me
Watch it Unfold
In Breathlessness
of its vast structure

Through the Realization..

that there is none

there is no structure, no rules, just breathless realization of foreverness of almost nothingness that happens to be everythingness.

Just beautiful.