Jack Frost

I love Rise of the Guardians and I love to write random little poems...so, yeah. Also, I'm new. I don't understand tags yet haha.

My skin is cold as ice

My heart is like a stone

I'm surrounded by people

But I still remain alone

People look right through me

They all just pass me by

They never hear me scream

They never see me cry

The only ones who see me

Act like I'm not there

The know that I exist

They just don't seem to care

I'll always be alone

I'll forever feel so lost

I'll always be invisible

I'll forever be... Jack Frost

Author's Note

Say what you think, say how you feel

Reviews

[Klep]

Nice. It's good, but I feel like this is just a bit too on the surface. I love the jack frost metaphor, but try digging deeper. Why does she feel so alone? Why does no one see her? What's at the core of these actions and reactions? Writing can be a great way to delve into things from different angles and come out with more clarity and insight than you had going in.

[Skullkay25]

Lol, yeah, not one of my deepest works. Its literally about Jack Frost. Its not even a metaphor. I just wanted to get something up there. Its an old poem. I'm working on fixing up one of my favorites. Thanks for the review!

[D]

some may think I stole your ideas,lol but I'm here longer, so pls no more stealing. lmao.
nice work

[Skullkay25]

what idea?

[D]

nothing important.lol my previous profile had a piece with the nearly the same lines as this one.lol

[Bala Gorthi]

I have just surfed the net and found about the Jack Frost and your poem gives a good description of that character. iI oved the verse I am surrounded by people but I still remain alone. This statement can hold true many beings as well. Sometimes we too find ourselves in that type of situation.
It is a good write.. Thanks sharing...
Keep sharing......