Life is...

Life is a scene
Which passes and passed
A picture on a screen
Broken and smashed

Life is a storm
With a task to confuse
Sometimes deform
And always bruise

Life is a vacuum which cleans out anything
Pulls you in or pushes you away
However it always ends up giving
Everyone a reason to stay

Life is hard and complicated
But worth living everyday
It might be debated
But it's still worth it all the way

Life is life...What can I say...?

Author's Note

This is my first draft of it... Loved the idea of the vacuum ;)

Reviews

[Invisible]

reminds me of the kinds of poems i wrote back in the day :)

[LadyInk]

:) im still trying to improve... :P

[Invisible]

you've got time, and so long as you don't become disappointed and disinterested in even bothering like i have, i'm sure you'll do fine.

[LadyInk]

I've often felt disappointed with my work and always seem to lose interest when writing my stories, it's like my mind just move on every few minutes :P.

[LadyInk]

But I keep trying, I thnk i might be starting to do better xD

[Invisible]

one can always hope. hope is sometimes all we ever really have. so keep it up, you never know what'll happen, in the end.

[Tasha]

Wow, this was really good and I love the comparison to the vaccum, very clever.
~Tasha

[LadyInk]

Thankyou!!!

[Tasha]

You're welcome!!