I can so why not?

I can so why not?

A Poem by LadyInk

You say i can't write
you wont let me talk
you shut down my light
then tell me to walk

i dont know whats wrong
or why nothing is right
i try to be strong
and not let hope out of sight

i live in pretense
in some crazy haze
where nothing makes sense
like being stuck in a maze

i dont know where im going
or when im gonna leave
i wonder what im doing
and why i was so naive

to think you really cared
to believe you would remember
all the good times we shared
when we were laughing together

But that's growing up,
learning when to shut up
trying to keep looking up
and never, ever giving up...

© 2013 LadyInk


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LadyInk
It's all me...

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Never giving up is the key to life. It's the only force of motion in this world we have at times. Life can be like an out of control vaccum, you never know if it's going to chase down after ya and try to suck you back, or it will reverse it's flow and push you away. =)

Nice Ink!
Aaron

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LadyInk

11 Years Ago

I really like the idea of the vacuum, I'm gonna try and write something with that...!
Wolfwind

11 Years Ago

Awesome! Go for it! =)



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Never giving up is the key to life. It's the only force of motion in this world we have at times. Life can be like an out of control vaccum, you never know if it's going to chase down after ya and try to suck you back, or it will reverse it's flow and push you away. =)

Nice Ink!
Aaron

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LadyInk

11 Years Ago

I really like the idea of the vacuum, I'm gonna try and write something with that...!
Wolfwind

11 Years Ago

Awesome! Go for it! =)

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Added on January 20, 2013
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LadyInk
LadyInk

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Im 15, i love writing and i want to get better at it... Im looking for people who will give me construtive criticism and who'll inspire me. I tend to think that what makes someone good at what they .. more..

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A Poem by LadyInk