Love and hate

Love and hate

A Poem by Michael Darnell
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My love life

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3'rd girl in two weeks
Thought i found the one
Turns out it meant none
Love is a b***h, that always bites back
Love is a b***h, it never gives back
Love is a b***h, it always hates back

© 2014 Michael Darnell


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I get the feeling of hopelessness from this character, seemingly fuelled by past bad experiences, maybe looking for love in the wrong places, short and direct. If this is in reference to yourself chin up and don't lose hope, true love is harsh and painful and drags you through the mud, and you will have to be lost in order to be found, don't lose hope, it will approach you when it's ready

Posted 10 Years Ago


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I get the feeling of hopelessness from this character, seemingly fuelled by past bad experiences, maybe looking for love in the wrong places, short and direct. If this is in reference to yourself chin up and don't lose hope, true love is harsh and painful and drags you through the mud, and you will have to be lost in order to be found, don't lose hope, it will approach you when it's ready

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Michael Darnell
Michael Darnell

Inverness, FL



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I'm 13 years old, I love reading+writing, but my absolute passion is music, I hope to share my feelings through stories and poems more..

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