Playing Games

Playing Games

A Poem by BlackHeart

If you look at me,

You will see a smile.

If you talk to me,

You will say I am kind.


But if you watch close,

You will see

That I am hurting


I want you to,

See the real me.

I'm done Hiding.

I'm done Trying.


I can see you don't care.

I can see that your playing.

Your dragging me along.

Playing with my heart.


Please stop,

Because this game

It's hurting,

It's killing,

Me on the inside.

© 2014 BlackHeart


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BlackHeart
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It's good, actually. And I can relate, having just gotten out of a similar situation.

Posted 10 Years Ago


BlackHeart

10 Years Ago

Thank you Cassie and I am glad that I can relate. I am sorry that you had to go through that how eve.. read more
John Thomas

10 Years Ago

You're welcome. It's nice to know that you're not alone sometimes with these things, lol.
I love that you poem is easy to relate to and you can tell that the pain is there. The pain exists in the writing and it feel so real! You did a wonderful job of adding some of reality to your poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


BlackHeart

10 Years Ago

Thank you I'm so glad that you can relate and feel what it is about that makes me so glad.
Love games. . .Wicked as they come, but I truly enjoyed this. "I can see that your playing.
Your dragging me along." My favorite lines!

Posted 10 Years Ago


BlackHeart

10 Years Ago

Thank you LoveAlwaysJB I am glad you liked it. And thank you so much for letting me know what you li.. read more
I like how you hinted through out the poem that you were feeling pain and that it was because of heart break. Especially with the sentence "Playing with my heart." It says so many different things with one sentence, but it's obvious the main intent, and easily understandable!! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


BlackHeart

10 Years Ago

Thank you I am glad that you understood what it was about.

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