Family Or Pain?

I look around me,

I am not sure what to say.

I am hurting on the inside.

I don’t think it’s from the coughing.

I feel like my family is falling.

They are leaving.

Not me but each other.

We are falling apart.

Please someone tell me how to stop it.

To stop the pain,

Its eating me up inside,

I don’t know if I should hide in a hole.

Or try and find someone to help me.

Should we let this happen?

Is it for the best?

I cannot tell you anything right now.

All I know is that this pain is killing me.

I want to hide away and hope that when I come back out.

It will be all better and my family will love each other again.

I don’t know if they hate me.

Or if they just hate each other.

All I know is that I don’t like seeing them like this.

I don’t know who to tell.

I don’t know what to say.

I am just in the middle,

And I can feel the storm getting worse.

How do people make it through this rough place,

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think of this piece and what you didn't like about it as well.

Reviews

[Abdul Alsaaidi]

It is very clear and very smiple that it can be a little story, you need to use a little symbolism to add depth to your words.

[BlackHeart]

Thank you for the review I will try to use little symbolism instead. Thank you very much.

[RazzySkittles]

Awesome Poem, it's really bitter, but truthful. It has a raw rustic vibe to it that's very down to earth and really appealing. And then Writing structure is easy to understand. :)

[BlackHeart]

Thank you for that, and I am glad that the structure was easy for you to understand and follow thank you very much.