-- hmmm... i majored in history in my B.A. and whenever i read about the downfall of a glorious civilization... i used to think of how survivors (when there were survivors) would actually live... -- it startles me to study my own life after it collapsed... -- but i don't see just the bleakness of all of that on this page... i see millions of metaphors merge into an allegory... which is courageously and meticulously reinforcing at least the freedom of expression... -- it's just no possible to suffer in silence... -- glad you said what you had to say...
I really enjoyed this. I don't want to analyse it too much - just enjoy the flow of brilliant imagery.
Well done!
Would you mind having a look at my poem 'Henry Moore - shapeshifter' if you have time?
Thanks,
Alan
Parsnip soup, chickens, and hollyhocks...random, and funny, but the rest of it...not so much. There is an epidemic of "spineless yes-men" and people that can't see, won't see, and just don't give a s**t about walrus's, hollyhocks, drinkable water, love, or anything that isn't plastic or fiat or nuclear. But, who's to blame? Them? Or us for letting them, even joining them?
Your poems make me react physically. I like this. It's not in a way that I am yearning for something I have felt before, but it is because your imagery continually presents ideas and creates reactions I have not experienced before. The word combinations are unique.
What can you say when standing knee deep in the middle of end time species evisceration and know one else seems to notice the insanity of the narrative?????