adult children (number 1)

my

adult children

have become cuddly now

 

they plop themselves

down

on the couch

 

next to me

wedged in tight

and heavy

against

my side

 

Reviews

[. serah .]

-- oh, am so glad to read the first part... -- very magical work... brimming with a universe of affection and adoration...

[...]

This is cozy=warm and full of heart smiles, SF :)

[roarke]

cuddly like a grizzly ya mean.... hahahahaaha.

[Penlady]

You did good dad! Its called affection...kids give what they want...lots of warmth sounds like to me!

[Beccy]

I like to think of my dad being cuddly, and me being the cuddler.

Sweet little poem about one of the nicer things in life.

Beccy.

[Ladysue]

there is much joy here in this warmth and contentment.. :)

[Jeannear]

simple and nice....good job

[Ed Hart]

sending you my biggest 'amen'

[Shaquana Adams]

I liked reading this from the adults point of view. Nice job :)

[justjenn_2u]

Says a lot to be older and not push. Shows that true love was taught to them. In 11 lines, you bring in what true love from a child is. Short and to the point, no puns intended, this is a great piece.