Rain

When the first drops fall

Pit

Pit-pat-pit

Drops fall on dry earth

Nature’s musk scents the air

Breathe deeply, intoxicating

Rejuvenating, renewing

Raindrops

Author's Note

simple poem about rain; all comments welcome

Reviews

[misha]

Such simplicity but the beauty in it is so much more. Great job!

[Sharon Kim]

Thank you so much for the read and the kind words, Misha!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the description of rain. Rain does so much for us. The poem create good vision and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sharon Kim]

Thank you for the reading! I'm glad you liked it! :)

[Lady Glitter]

Love it! I think you said that about mine that you reviewed, lol. But I do love rain. Each line of this short verse just tripped off of my tongue. It felt just like the experience of rain beginning, just as you meant your poem to be. I could even see the little puffs of dust as the droplets hit the parched patches of dirt in the grass.

[Sharon Kim]

Thank you for your kind words! I'm so glad it came across like that. :)

[Briana O'Connor]

I just love rain! This poem describes the beauty simply, yet eloquently!

[Sharon Kim]

Thank you Briana!

[Ty]

I love rain. You did great showing that freeing feeling of rain with so little.

[Sharon Kim]

Thank you Ty!

[Wórdsmíth]

Beautiful, insightful write on the Rain. Rain`s everyone`s favorite around the world so is its every spherical drop which brings the coldness on our surrounds .. to make us all cold and smiley with the blessings of nature. Wonderful Work!

[Sharon Kim]

Thank you so much for the read and the kind words!

[Moon]

I absolutely love this one! Despite its simplicity, it is beautifully written. I enjoy listening to the rain and the smell of the damp Earth.

[Sharon Kim]

Thank you Hayleigh. I'm glad you enjoyed it! I love that earth smell too.

[Moon]

You are welcome

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Rain is beautiful. A simple but effective poem. I wish it would rain now.

[Sharon Kim]

Thank you for reading! We've had clouds for three days, I wish it would rain and get it over with!

[Woody]

oh yes. how can we not love the rain? I love this little poem and the shape you've written it in.
a drop of rain!! clever.

[Sharon Kim]

Thanks Woody! Glad you noticed the shape. :)

[Woody]

you're welcome :)