The Ocean's Emotion Potion

just having fun with a word pattern

The Ocean’s Potion

The nation has a notion

Of vacation at the ocean

That sensation of the motion

An inspiration of devotion

A celebration of emotion

The creation of a potion

-The ocean’s emotion potion

Author's Note

just having fun-any comments welcome

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of words for the sea. Your words lively and a fun poem to read. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sharon Kim]

Thanks! I was having fun playing with the words. :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Lol... yeah, it`s really very funny write. It makes me smile. You played with the words very beautifully. Keep writing!

[Sharon Kim]

Thanks for reading! I'm glad it made you smile. :)