Naptime

story in 6 words

Phone rings, baby cries.  Mother sighs.

Reviews

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

How many times has this happened to me as well?! Six word poems, love them and you nailed it.

[ShelleyA]

Hi Sharon. Excellent use of brevity. Good imagery and descriptives. I can feel the frustration of this mother as her baby is awakened by a ringing telephone. Well penned and a good read. Write on!