I'll Never Believe
A Book by Persona
 Jesus makes a deal with The Devil to find love. When he meets the sweet Miranda, he only has 7 days to make her love him. The best part? Of course she's an atheist!  © 2012 Persona
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BTW Jesus and God are the same person.
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aw yes, that comes by chapter 4. Someone told me I jumped into that too fast so I slowed it down so you could get to know Jesus first! Judaist is another term for Jewish. It felt appropriate. I'm not Jewish myself but I thought "Jew" might offend.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Very nicely written. Yeah I know about the concept of trinity so I'm not confused. Great write!
Oh and btw, you said it was longer than the word count. Please consider only version 2. Thanks.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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PersonaBirmingham, West Midlands, United Kingdom
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