Protector
A Poem by
Persona
A haiku about making a person feel loved when they need it.
Clutch me when I'm weak and hold me securely so
I can become strong
© 2013 Persona
Reviews
A great poem. Okay, clarify for me, how this is haiku? I am not being facetious, just wondering, is it not more a senryu?
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
It's a haiku, count the syllables
So this poem had me from the Picture. (BUFFY AND ANGEL) and then I read the actual poem. Short sweet to the point. Packs a lot of deep raw emotions in just a few short lines. Very well written. 100/100
Posted 10 Years Ago
So this poem had me from the Picture. (BUFFY AND ANGEL) and then I read the actual poem. Short sweet to the point. Packs a lot of deep raw emotions in just a few short lines. Very well written. 100/100
10 Years Ago
Thank you. :)
Aw. I love haikus. This was short but provoking. Can be a great prompt for a short story. Definitely liked it. Beautiful and nicely-penned. Speaks love and affection. Great one! ^^
Posted 10 Years Ago
Aw. I love haikus. This was short but provoking. Can be a great prompt for a short story. Definitely liked it. Beautiful and nicely-penned. Speaks love and affection. Great one! ^^
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you, that's very nice of you. :)
10 Years Ago
You're welcome. :)
Simple and expressive. Great job
Posted 11 Years Ago
Simple and expressive. Great job
A simple haiku, but depicts powerful emotions that convey a powerful trust. Amazing.
Posted 11 Years Ago
A simple haiku, but depicts powerful emotions that convey a powerful trust. Amazing.
Simple and great. Love it
Posted 11 Years Ago
Simple and great. Love it
11 Years Ago
Thanks Felecia!
Short, simple but powerful! Great Stuff
Posted 11 Years Ago
Short, simple but powerful! Great Stuff
11 Years Ago
Thank you Hester
very nice
Posted 11 Years Ago
very nice
11 Years Ago
Thank you Cara
Really cute! Great job! :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Really cute! Great job! :)
Good one
Posted 11 Years Ago
Good one
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Added on February 6, 2013
Last Updated on February 8, 2013
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Persona Birmingham, West Midlands, United Kingdom
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