Protector

Protector

A Poem by Persona
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A haiku about making a person feel loved when they need it.

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Clutch me when I'm weak
and hold me securely so
I can become strong 

© 2013 Persona


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A great poem. Okay, clarify for me, how this is haiku? I am not being facetious, just wondering, is it not more a senryu?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Persona

10 Years Ago

It's a haiku, count the syllables
So this poem had me from the Picture. (BUFFY AND ANGEL) and then I read the actual poem. Short sweet to the point. Packs a lot of deep raw emotions in just a few short lines. Very well written. 100/100

Posted 10 Years Ago


Persona

10 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
Aw. I love haikus. This was short but provoking. Can be a great prompt for a short story. Definitely liked it. Beautiful and nicely-penned. Speaks love and affection. Great one! ^^

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Persona

10 Years Ago

Thank you, that's very nice of you. :)
Thea

10 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
Simple and expressive. Great job

Posted 11 Years Ago


A simple haiku, but depicts powerful emotions that convey a powerful trust. Amazing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Persona

11 Years Ago

Thanks Jem!
Simple and great. Love it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Persona

11 Years Ago

Thanks Felecia!
Short, simple but powerful! Great Stuff

Posted 11 Years Ago


Persona

11 Years Ago

Thank you Hester
very nice

Posted 11 Years Ago


Persona

11 Years Ago

Thank you Cara
Really cute! Great job! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Persona

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Good one

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on February 6, 2013
Last Updated on February 8, 2013
Tags: poem, protector, haiku

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Birmingham, West Midlands, United Kingdom



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