Protector

Protector

A Poem by Persona
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A haiku about making a person feel loved when they need it.

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Clutch me when I'm weak
and hold me securely so
I can become strong 

© 2013 Persona


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Such a simple poem but it captures the fact that we need love and order to survive and persevere in a world were hard Times are common. Great write.
Unspoken_hero

Posted 10 Years Ago


╰☆╮Aw, this is a very sweet haiku. I don't see many on here so I get excited when I read one, haha.╰☆╮

Posted 10 Years Ago


How comforting.
I almost didn't recognize it as a haiku because the first line is visually longer.
I like that you hit both on support and independence.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Persona

10 Years Ago

Thank you C. Rose
Such lovely words.


I love Haikus thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.


Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 10 Years Ago


Persona

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

You're very welcome. it's my pleasure always. blessings. kindred poet
Beautifully choice of words. :-) nicely written.

Kaze~

Posted 10 Years Ago


Persona

10 Years Ago

Thank you Kaze. Love your name by the way.
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

10 Years Ago

Your very welcome, and thank you. :-)
This was beautiful. A wonderful thought and desire. I enjoyed this a lot today.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Persona

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
The perfect words for your protector...

Words to hold on to forever.
Nicely done.

- Elisa

Posted 10 Years Ago


Persona

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on February 6, 2013
Last Updated on February 8, 2013
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Birmingham, West Midlands, United Kingdom



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