Protector
A Poem by
Persona
A haiku about making a person feel loved when they need it.
Clutch me when I'm weak and hold me securely so
I can become strong
© 2013 Persona
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Reviews
Such a simple poem but it captures the fact that we need love and order to survive and persevere in a world were hard Times are common. Great write.
Unspoken_hero
Posted 9 Years Ago
╰☆╮Aw, this is a very sweet haiku. I don't see many on here so I get excited when I read one, haha.╰☆╮
Posted 10 Years Ago
╰☆╮Aw, this is a very sweet haiku. I don't see many on here so I get excited when I read one, haha.╰☆╮
How comforting.
I almost didn't recognize it as a haiku because the first line is visually longer.
I like that you hit both on support and independence.
Posted 10 Years Ago
How comforting.
I almost didn't recognize it as a haiku because the first line is visually longer.
I like that you hit both on support and independence.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you C. Rose
Such lovely words.
I love Haikus thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.
Blessings. kindred poet
Posted 10 Years Ago
Such lovely words.
I love Haikus thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.
Blessings. kindred poet
10 Years Ago
You're very welcome. it's my pleasure always. blessings. kindred poet
Beautifully choice of words. :-) nicely written.
Kaze~
Posted 10 Years Ago
Beautifully choice of words. :-) nicely written.
Kaze~
10 Years Ago
Thank you Kaze. Love your name by the way.
10 Years Ago
Your very welcome, and thank you. :-)
This was beautiful. A wonderful thought and desire. I enjoyed this a lot today.
Posted 10 Years Ago
This was beautiful. A wonderful thought and desire. I enjoyed this a lot today.
The perfect words for your protector...
Words to hold on to forever.
Nicely done.
- Elisa
Posted 10 Years Ago
The perfect words for your protector...
Words to hold on to forever.
Nicely done.
- Elisa
10 Years Ago
Thank you :)
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Persona Birmingham, West Midlands, United Kingdom
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