Protector

A haiku about making a person feel loved when they need it.

Clutch me when I'm weak

and hold me securely so

I can become strong 

Reviews

[unspoken_hero]

Such a simple poem but it captures the fact that we need love and order to survive and persevere in a world were hard Times are common. Great write.
Unspoken_hero

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮Aw, this is a very sweet haiku. I don't see many on here so I get excited when I read one, haha.╰☆╮

[C. Rose]

How comforting.
I almost didn't recognize it as a haiku because the first line is visually longer.
I like that you hit both on support and independence.

[Persona]

Thank you C. Rose

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Such lovely words.


I love Haikus thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.


Blessings. kindred poet

[Persona]

Thank you.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome. it's my pleasure always. blessings. kindred poet

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Beautifully choice of words. :-) nicely written.

Kaze~

[Persona]

Thank you Kaze. Love your name by the way.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome, and thank you. :-)

[willweb]

This was beautiful. A wonderful thought and desire. I enjoyed this a lot today.

[Persona]

Thank you.

[Persona]

The perfect words for your protector...

Words to hold on to forever.
Nicely done.

- Elisa

[Persona]

Thank you :)