Miss Killer

About Power

Pedestrians watch, glued to the spot.

Miss Killer walks their street.

With a flick of her delicate wrist

she can throw a heavy weight against a building.

Strolling past, as if roaming through a field of flowers

Miss Killer flaunts her casual control.

Eyes follow her, people tense. 

Eyeing them back, next victim found.

Her space is respected, like Moses

dividing the crowds through the middle

without touch, can split a cheek in two.

Eyes dart to drivers,

wheels spin, panicked

pulling cars up vertically.

Her fist closes

The man inside screaming

clutching his seat

while Miss Killer, relaxing her arm

drops the car.

All jump back, shield themselves 

from shredded metal 

and bloody remains.

Author's Note

Honest reviews please. I keep playing around with it but it's not up to the quality I'd like.

Reviews

[Sophy Freebirds]

After reading the title i thought of something a girl with killer looks who turns the heads around the street.. but this was totally unexpected- a blast of feminine power. Normally woman are regarded as weaker vessel.. But this poem empowers woman..

~Sophy

[Persona]

Thank you Sophy for reading.

[Matching Socks]

Gosh, it's like she's rolled in like a tornado or a hurricane!
Great write. :-)

[laalaxox]

Woah Really enjoyed reading this!!

[Lyn Anderson]

I am not sure how to take this one. Going to have to come back to it.

[Persona]

I definitely want help with it, so feel free to go for it x

[Krista Weiss]

Wow! I love this! :) Really great job!!

[Persona]

Thank you Krista!

[Emunah June.]

I like that you combined the whole feel of Skrillex and his work into the first few lines. The story fits really well with the feel of the music (I was listening to it as I was reading lol) and your idea is solid. Love that line "The Reason you live is because I control your movemets". Excellent! :3

[Persona]

Thank you, I hoped you'd like it

[Emunah June.]

I did very much so! :D