Blades & Blood

Blades & Blood

A Poem by Dreamer

The tears are streaming down my face,

I pull out my pocket knife and examine it's blade.

I slit my wrists...blood trickles to the floor.

the pain doesn't bother me... it fact in a way it seems to comfort me.

One of these days, however, the sharpness of the blade just won't suffice

I'll pull out a pistol and end it for good, blood splattered everywhere and my body lying there on the floor.

© 2013 Dreamer


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Dreamer
it's a work in progress... open to suggestions & comments though

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It IS hard dealing with life... hard dealing with - just dealing. But the alternatives are anger and pain for the ones that gave a damn and for the ones that didn't - they still won't.

Control is pretty elusive for most people sometime or another and often getting just enough space to catch a breath seems so unreal. Life ain't fair and nothings free but ...there ARE people willing to listen, willing to reach out - if you give them the chance. And sometimes life isn't all that bad... one step, one day at a time - pause and breathe...then another.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

10 Years Ago

I appreciate your thoughts!



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I hope that is just a nightmare...A scary write on suicide...:).........

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

11 Years Ago

sadly, it's not just a nightmare.
thanks for your comment!
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Wow. You are welcome...:)......................
This is a very raw and emotional piece. I feel your pain.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

11 Years Ago

thank you very much!
It is a harsh write that speaks of the immaturity of suicidal thoughts in some. Those who are truly suicidal do not paint pictures of it. Those who cannot deal a with life and responsibility for self, do because they are keen to tell the world they are troubled and unable to a swim. They even go so far as self harm. Interesting piece and I hope simply poetic in nature?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

11 Years Ago

thank you very much for your thoughts and comments.

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Jackson, OH



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My name is Katie, I'm a senior in high school who loves reading, writing & photography. My dream college is University of Cincinnati... I've wanted to go there since I was 8. I love playing soccer an.. more..

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