I love you

Dedicated To My Love <3

 I know that I shouldn't; but I can't help myself:

I love you, and that's the truth.

 

Every second of every day I long to be with you, I think of you and can't help but smile, when you're not near me I miss you more than anything:

I miss your smile,

I miss your laugh,

I miss your voice,

I miss your eyes,

 

Even though I shouldn't have;

I fell in love with you.

I don't know why,

I don't know how,

I just did.

 

Now when I see you, I miss your smile.

when I see your smile, I want your hug.

When I hug you, I want your kiss.

 

Yes it's true, though I shouldn't:

I truly love you <3

Reviews

[dw817]

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Is it wrong to fall in love ? No, not at all. It never is. What can support this then if some people feel it is 'wrong' to fall in love ? Because then it is not love. It is lust or the feeling or desire of having someone protect them, or they want to protect someone, or they want a parent figure, or they want to be a parent figure to someone.

Or maybe they want to be with the person because there are benefits, things this person can offer them they cannot provide for themselves.

Then it is called a co-dependent relationship.
http://bit.ly/9WMEsS

So, if you are in love, and it really is just pure loving love, it is always - ALWAYS just right - to fall right into it - everytime. :)

[Dreamer]

Thanks for your comments (: I really do love him, even though I'm afraid he might not feel the same way anymore :/

[dw817]

You have but to ask ... Take care. :)

[Dreamer]

if only it were that simple, thanks... you too (:

[pinkunicorn]

I was smiling the whole time, when I was Reading this.
Well done, it's Beautiful!

[Dreamer]

why thank you (:

[BubblingMe]

I love this poem, so romantic!

[Dreamer]

thank you (:

[Vidya Bacchus]

this is a very nice write ,I really like it thank you for penning

[Dreamer]

thanks... I appreciate it. your welcome

[Child of God]

This is very nice, I really enjoyed it :)

[Dreamer]

Thanks for your review, Ryan!

[Basu Gupta]

this one's the best..
Especially the last lines are very very good..
Keep writing you've a burning spirit for the purest feeling 'love'..
So better pen it down in the form of your lovely poems untill it goes away..
Thanks for sharing..

[Dreamer]

Thank you fellow writer (:

[s y e]

This is beautiful, stunning even. You've written such a beautiful poem. The feeling is relatable to loads!

[Dreamer]

why thank you very much. (:

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love. When love overtake us. We have no chance. I like the flow and the positive feel to the words. A good ending to a amazing poem.
Coyote

[Dreamer]

Why, thank you very much for your positive review (:
It is greatly appreciated!

[Quiet Child]

it's a good write! (: knowing who this is about, i will not say, for no nice words would come from it. he screwed with you, and that's not allowable in my book.

[Dreamer]

Thanks, yeah I know how much you hate him, trust me I'm still plenty mad at him but.... I don't know why but I still love him....crazy after what he did huh?

[Quiet Child]

well it may be a bit masochistic, but not insane.

[Dreamer]

um, big word!? masochistic isn't a word that is in my developing vocabulary

[Quiet Child]

masochistic: A willingness or tendency to subject oneself to unpleasant or trying experiences.
that's one definition.

[Dreamer]

ah alright I see. I find it slightly insane that I defend him and that I love him after what happened between us and what he did to me

[Quiet Child]

you may see yourself in another light than how others see you. this will explain the varying opinion. like me, i know i'm odd, you know it and i pride myself on it. as always. (:

[Dreamer]

I see myself in no light, rather all I seem to see is darkness. yeah, you're odd...but hell, everyone is...

[Quiet Child]

sure.........

[beautiful dreamer]

i know the feeling sweetie, it sucks. very good expression through your writing!

[Dreamer]

aw why thank you very much (:

[beautiful dreamer]

you are very welcome!

[Dreamer]

I appreciate it!!