Who Says?

Who Says?

A Poem by Dreamer
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Basically a bunch of questions I ask myself..

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Who says?...

That I can't break free from who I used to be?

That I can't change the world?

That I can't get stoned?

That I can't be paranoid?

That I can't live without you?

That i can't scream at the top of my lungs?

 

 

 

 

 

 

What do they know?

I'll show them all,

because I can do whatever I want...just watch me.

© 2013 Dreamer


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Nice. I like this poem. I believe we limit ourselves in all things. A fearless person can make many mistakes. At least you had lived. Honest and direct words. My kind of poetry. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

11 Years Ago

you're welcome! and thank you for such a great review (:



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Be productive and not destructive.:) Excellent read and write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

11 Years Ago

Why thank you (:
very empowering and prideful in a well executed non-arrogant way thats like this is the way i'm going to be deal with it without being insulting. very well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

11 Years Ago

Thank you........
beautiful dreamer

11 Years Ago

you're welcome!
Dreamer

11 Years Ago

I appreciate your positive reviews!
We have so much flexibility within our relative freedom. Isn't it wonderful? Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

11 Years Ago

You're welcome and thanks for your comments
Sounds like high school angst, unfortunately we still ask ourselves these questions when we grow up too, or do we ever? Nicely pen'd Dreamer.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

11 Years Ago

Thank you kindly for your review
I like it. Showing retaliation against those who try to tell you to be someone you're not. Keep living this way and you'll go far.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dreamer

11 Years Ago

Thanks very much for your comments!
A poem of self - affirmation. Splendid...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Dreamer

11 Years Ago

It is much appreciated
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)........

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Added on September 23, 2013
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Dreamer
Dreamer

Jackson, OH



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My name is Katie, I'm a senior in high school who loves reading, writing & photography. My dream college is University of Cincinnati... I've wanted to go there since I was 8. I love playing soccer an.. more..

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