Who Says?

Basically a bunch of questions I ask myself..

Who says?...

That I can't break free from who I used to be?

That I can't change the world?

That I can't get stoned?

That I can't be paranoid?

That I can't live without you?

That i can't scream at the top of my lungs?

 

 

 

 

 

 

What do they know?

I'll show them all,

because I can do whatever I want...just watch me.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice. I like this poem. I believe we limit ourselves in all things. A fearless person can make many mistakes. At least you had lived. Honest and direct words. My kind of poetry. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Dreamer]

you're welcome! and thank you for such a great review (:

[BubblingMe]

I can relate to this, this was powerful and beautiful (:

[Dreamer]

I'm glad you liked it (:

[BubblingMe]

I add it to my favorites :D

[Dreamer]

awesome :D

[BubblingMe]

Haha no problem!:)

[MikeV]

Be you, aslong as you know the difference
between right and wrong. Follow your heart
great write :)

[Dreamer]

Thank you for your review

[Patrick O'Neil]

Great a battle cry. Be yourself that is the best you can ever be.

[Dreamer]

Why thank you (:

[Patrick O'Neil]

You are most welcome :)

[Dreamer]

I appreciate it greatly

[Inda]

Great stuff! Emotional and honest. Fantastic!

[Dreamer]

Thank you very much! I appreciate it (:

[Jake Dyson]

Loved it. I remember feeling like that in my late teenage years, well done :)

[Dreamer]

Thank you Jake!

[Quiet Child]

inspirational type of writing, you can do anything id you set your mind to it! great write!

[Quiet Child]

spelling correction if*

[Dreamer]

Thank you very much! (:

[Quiet Child]

welcome kiddo! (:

[Dreamer]

:D.............

[Lydia Shutter]

Look out world, here you come! :) Very empowering words. Good one. Lydi**

[Dreamer]

Why thank you very much! I appreciate you reading it and taking the time to review it.

[OTownPete]

I got your back be sure of that. You are breathing fire. Your friend in words, Pete

[Dreamer]

thank you pete!