Stargazing

Stray thoughts always enter the wrong lane
At a wrong time
Shooting towards an unthinkable reality

Whisking past the glittering cases
Of showcased dreams
And throbbing promises
That sustain the dying stars
And the dying hearts

Riding on the crest of night's breath
A careless gaze chases
Luring the thoughts back into a known realm

As the sleep works its magic
Intoxicating an alert consciousness
Into blissful ignorance

I smile at a familiar touch
A familiar gaze
Chasing, perhaps, the same dreams
Under this starlit canopy of the night

Author's Note

Not strictly romantic, but... :)

Reviews

[Melaniespace]

Awesome piece with great imagery. the poem overtook me and left me wanting more. I didn't realize the subject was alone til the end. I like how it started off a little dreary and ended brightly. its a great feeling to go with the contrast and calming effect of a clear night sky.

[Ian Faraway]

This was hauntingly good. The imagery of stargazing and the feelings they bring can easily be related to. Stargazing is both miraculous and almost...sad, in a way, at the same time. J'adore! -Ian

[Annie29]

Lol. So romantic, makes me want to just cuddle up.
Two thumbs up.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the photo and the description of watching the star. Good to share a sky and feel the freedom of the night. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Hotwater]

It feels romantic... though dream-like. It creates a feeling of calm... yes, calm for me is the right word.
*bird*

[unknown]

always nice to able to look at the starts at night..i havent had one of these moments yet though.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very evocative....creates a wonderful scene, terrific :D

[joshua deathdealer]

Wonderful. I love the journey your words spoke of. Amazing work.

[light and ashes]

Such a beautiful and peaceful poem. It also has a sense of romantic whimsy, amazing.