Down the Life's Procellous Paths

For the group 'Creative Poetry'.

Down the life’s procellous paths

Moments come but never last

Spiritual outreach to the heavens above

Blithe and burdened with hate and love

Tears with their unexpected outpour

Magical feelings and hopes that soar

Elated smiles and misty eyes

Forever, on the path, they lie

Too far, an end; Too soon, it comes

Frayed ends are finally undone

But a single moment truly lived

Is worth all and more, the risk

Author's Note

Back to rhyming, I guess. :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Procellous Paths are good words. I had to research. I like the poem. I like the feel and energy of the poem. Last line is true. If something is risky. It is more fun to overcome. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Becky C Strukamp]

Very nice Rhyming I say. Your words are well chosen and it reads smoothly ...enjoyed reading it. thanks for sharing!

[WhiteWillow]

This is a great piece! Loved the rhyming, and the message you convey. Well written

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great poem. If we stand still then we are observing life rather than live it. If we don't act then we will never know what could have happened and always wonder what would have happened. This is a great poem for waking up the spirit to live life and remember those special memories that make us smile in the dark.

[Moflo]

The rhyming worked out very nicely in this piece, I feel. Very nicely worded, I like the title too. Good job.

[Hotwater]

Sounds like chrissy day opening the pressies! lol... (just funning!) All things have endings, the good bits always end too soon and the not so good linger... that's why the last two lines speak volumes. A good "thinky' poem.
*bird*

[Myenigma]

I like it!
"Spiritual outreach to the heavens above
Blithe and burdened with hate and love "!!

[Sagar Waingankar]

:-) Dual mentality reflected in your poem! We ourselves are much confused about things around us! It may be so, as we know both pros and cons about a thing :P But the one who is determined does as per wish!

[∂αʌ<..]

aaaaaah! life! so unpredictable! but thats the twitch...thats the thing which make us wake up again and again every morning, ready to brace up the challenge of life everyday! :)

a fascinating poem!

[Midori]

vary interesting I like it