A stone does not need a friend

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Fight a losing battle

Come, Live the moment

With me

Have all your diplomacies

Over shadowed

Let irrational passion

Drive you to your wits end

Foreshadowing your ideals

Be primitive

Be free

Be you, yourself

 

But beware

For the ties of disguise

Bind you to love

Reality fends off alone

Have you known?

Liberate your mind

Crush your heart

All at the same time

 

I hold on to the facade

With  patient smiles

And naive innocence

The horrors of lonliness

Are a bit too much to take

 

But don't push me too far

Make a stone of my heart

For if it stops beating, but once

It won't beat again

And a stone does not need a friend

Author's Note

Came out with it in less than two minutes. Hope you like it.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem a lot. You create a feel and emotion of wisdom and appreciation for life in the amazing poetry. So many strong statements in the poem. I like the complete poem. The ending made the poem complete. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[ForTheWorld]

it's a wonderful poem...one-of-a-kind...definitely!!! I enjoyed reading it again and again.... =D

[light and ashes]

Amazing and phenomenal poem! I love it! The last stanza is the best part for me, brilliant.

[Black Swan Poetry]

And a stone does not need a friend :) nice

[.]

I really like the concept..the freedom that you search and the warning at the end..the metaphor is great..

[stars are far]

nice poem..

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

you hurt me I will not be here to hurt again, I will not be available nor will I care....well done.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Wow...amazing poetry...and 2 mins!!! Splendid indeed xD

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I really like this write, it captures the feeling of loneliness. I loved the last stanza the best. Awesome writing.