An Eternity Of Love

Romance...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Giving a distinct shape

To my life and my being

With a mere presence

Like a breath of fresh air

Washing away all my tears

An intoxicating liberation

You bring with yourself

The fragrance of hope

Illuminating the world around me

Though I look nowhere else

Except within your eyes

A sense of touch

Electrifies; revives

Erases the numbness that settled

And as the dust and cobwebs and the rotten smell

Of a decadent desire

To live a full life

Burn, in your words of love

I want to be consumed in this fire

You are not my leader

Yet I follow you out into the world of my dreams

You are not my follower

Yet, I lead you inside the deepest chambers of my heart

You walk beside me

An equally gratifying experience

To fill the gaps of your desires

As you fill mine

Fulfilling and completing each other

You are real and yet,

You fly me to an unreal realm

As the bubble of our existence

Expands to absorb the whole world and more

All I need, is you

And an eternity of love

Author's Note

Does it seem to end abruptly?

Reviews

[∂αʌ<..]

"A sense of touch
Electrifies; revives.."

and nope! never! it doesnt end abruptly...i was just so immensed in it; in its beauty, i actually thought it was everlasting! a magnificent piece of work Siya! i just love it! and there it goes in my favourite list!

and then love is just love!;)
Daveena

[Just Cat]

Aww this is so sweet, the end brought tears to my eyes!
It's such a beatiful poem, and glorifies love in all its glory.
Beautifully done :)

[Groovy]

well written piece.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

The picture you painted here really warmed my heart, beautiful!

[Dream Weaver]

This one gave me goosebumps!
Sublime and picturesque in it's
amorous description... Nice!

[Hotwater]

Love can end abruptly, so the work is fine, you have a good smooth flow of romantic sentiments all down the page. Very romantic indeed... very good work.
*bird*

[KAREN]

Breath taking and so beautiful and romantic!

[Dayran]

Touches a nerve, a fair one, that, which we relied on for our hopes and dreams. Encapsulates the experience and places a cherry on it. We want more!

[joshua deathdealer]

Outstanding work. Truly..xx

[Sunni Davis]

*sigh* My romantic heart is rejoicing in this. Its so perfect...every word of it. This is true romance at its core. Completely beautiful.

[Raven Starhawk]

Lovely words that you chose. Honestly this was a real pick me up. As I sit here I am drawn to your stanzas and love their pace.