Power

For the group 'Creative Poetry'.

Hear the revelry surrounding you

It paves its way into your mind

Inescapable, it has always been

Throw open your windows

Throw open the blinds of your eyes

And watch the wondrous nature perform

One of its many boisterous feats

Feel the billows of the mighty wind

As it embraces you tight

And leaves you, fluttering

Heed the path it follows

Unadulterated, limitless debauchery

Feel the loss of your significance

As you face the grand arrival of the storm

Look beyond the negatory illusion

It grants and recants the breath of life

Palliates the wounded earth

And leaves with its exalted pride

With all its strength nebulized

And you question yourself

If man is really that mighty

Author's Note

I thank Poetic Beauty for making yet another challenge to push my writing skills further. This is definitely a breakthrough concerning my writer's block. As usual, title seems a bit ill-fitted. Suggestions are welcome.
Thank you for reading. :)

Reviews

[kurrupted]

Like its title this piece in itself is "POWERFUL" and the intensity seem to increase as the lines flowed. Lovely theme and the lines

As you face the grand arrival of the storm
Look beyond the negatory illusion
It grants and recants the breath of life
Palliates the wounded earth
And leaves with its exalted pride
With all its strength nebulized
And you question yourself

Really do stand out to me as the last line sealed it all up. Thumb up??? No! Double thumbs up, great piece.

[perfectlyadapted]

Wonderful. Honestly I had to read it again because it didn't quite grab me the first time around. Second time was the charm. You wove something quite spectacular here. Thanks for sharing.

As for the title I think it fits fine.
"Humanity Kneels"
"Awestruck"
"Surrender to the Rumble"
"Shaken by Nature's Pride"
Yeah these aren't that great better stick to your first choice haha.

[KAREN]

A very powerful deep solid write!

[ImagineItAll]

Amazing! This is such a beautiful write! The way you describe nature and bring up a grand question at the end that most people just assume is true.

[Lily Mae]

This is excellent and I'd say your writers block is very gone..xx

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Great use of vocabulary and fitted in so well to the flow, top effort :)

[Hotwater]

Great image portrayed, I see someone with open arms "welcoming" the storm, I think you are so "unblocked" now! Title, Natures Power? (just a thought)
*bird*

[Richielee]

great words,great lines = great write

[Dayran]

Interesting!