Together as one

Together as one

A Poem by Enigma
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One word. "Weird". :P

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Today was the day when all the beauty of the world

Was surpassed

As he galloped towards me

I could barely continue breathing

The mighty head

Glowing brighter than the Sun

For the victory had been ours

His blue being

Bluer than the blue skies

So deep, so perfect

The white eyes, as they searched for me

And the mischievous smile

It crept on his muscular face

That hung high on his frame

Tall, oh so tall

As the wind played with his white strands of hair

And the flyers buzzed about him

Announcing his arrival

I hid my blushing self behind the wall

Purple-hued, how could I face him

Yet, I wanted nothing but that

Nothing but him

Another glimpse of that natural perfection

The smooth outline of his figure

Searching among the trees

Traitors, they don’t root themselves to the ground anymore

Rather glide and fly

At the mercy of the wind

And the grass

It never ceases to tickle you

The golden tentacles brushing against my feet

Tickling mercilessly

Bent on destroying my cover

I turn back and close my eyes

He has been gone for more than a decade

And though we are immortals

Yet, every day passed slower than a second

Tormenting thoughts and doubts

You never know when a creature so fine

Falls for another of its kind

And yet, the fluttering hope

That he will come back to me

As he promised

When we were kids

Long back when life first opened its eyes on our land

Still awed by his imposing personality

I followed him like a ghost

I knew I loved him then

I know I love him now

The more I hide, the more torturous it would be

So I walk out of my refuge in the broad daylight of the three stars

I stand there, without a pretense

Of what I am and what I’m there for

In acceptance of his ultimate choice

I collect my gift of the glittering stones

For the winner of our tribe

Who hunted down the enemies

And brought peace and freedom to our land

Whose name instills fear in the hearts of the evil ones

Who blushes as he sees me smiling

And we stand there, facing each other

Caught up in one moment of time

Hands clasped, exchanging memories through our senses

Melting the lines of our existence

Fusing into one gleaming orb of light

We are as we always were and always will be

Together as one

© 2011 Enigma


Author's Note

Enigma
An attempt to break through the imprionment of this accursed writer's block. :P
But still, this being my first attempt at HIGH FANTASY, don't be too harsh. In need of constructive critisicm for this one.

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didn't know it was the start of something more..like the idea..works well

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well i would give constructive criticism but i thoroughly enjoyed this and found no fault with it.Very engaging and written very well

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A river meanders to avoid the flow for a while, just to enjoy a state of being itself. It does that all the time.

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