Solitary steps down the lane of times past

Solitary steps down the lane of times past

A Story by Enigma

Nothing beats the pleasure and nothing brings you closer to the nature more than a silent solitary walk in a breezy evening in the woods. I have experienced it but once, with slight differences in the set up of the scene but then, the tranquility was very much there. The endless expanse spread all around me, dotted with leaves of all possible hues and the tall canopy of trees, made me realize how beautiful nature really is. Having spent all my life in the urban world full of concrete building and asphalt roads and well trimmed gardens, I was unaware of the wild beauty that nature has perfected in all these gazillion years every since the first plant sprouted and unfurled its lush green leaf to the golden rays of the Sun. So much time has passed. So many changes, both beneficial and disastrous, have occurred. The advent and subsequent evolution of mankind, for one. It was beneficial till the time the cutting of trees, and the hunting of animals started taking its toll on our beloved planet. Not to mention the population boom. The earth is still spinning with an immense weight upon itself and finally, the people have realized that such unheeded and relentless destruction for a little immediate gains is definitely bright forth “APOCALYPSE” into our real world.

 

It wondrous how a few steps taken can push my mind so far back into time and think about things that appear disjoint and yet, with a deeper reflection, we find every single ‘thing’ is related to every other ‘thing’. The world really is a humungous, entangled web, something my imagination tries and fails to conjure with all its detail. What are we? Just a part, a very dominant one though, of this chain of existence. What am I? Just a single individual, one in the score of billions of others like me.

 

And yet, a single walk in the woods has made me feel so significant in ways that I can’t put down in words. I see a tiny plant that has sprouted but a few days ago. And I see trees so tall that they appear to have pierced the sky and spread their branches all the way up to the starry heavens. For only a moment, but I feel like I’m the only one here, to enjoy these fascinating sights which are not quite so out of the ordinary and yet, one attempt at a deep observation and we find immense beauty in all the simplicity of the plants. A lush green leaf with a perfect texture. A flower that has been moulded by God himself into sheer perfection and colours filled by every rainbow that has ever adorned the clear blue skies. The grass, crowned with dew and softer than any mattress I’ve lied down. Simple things. Not so simple thoughts. And beauty beyond the thinking of a single insignificant human.

 

How amazing it is that a single walk, a mere few steps into this garden of life and make my mind travel to so many places and times of which only a single thought in my mind exists.

© 2011 Enigma


Author's Note

Enigma
Stray thoughts. Hahaha. :)

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Love it! I love how something so simple causes all of these thoughts to just consume you! This is wonderful: "Simple things. Not so simple thoughts. And beauty beyond the thinking of a single insignificant human." I wish that more people could experience these feelings-the ones that you just described. A lot of people can't see that or feel that.

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... That was gorgeous. Now I really want to go take a walk in some woods. :( unfortunately there are none where I live... but from this write, I got more experience than I probably could in person. Fantastic!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Very good thoughts. I wish I time and money. In Michigan if you go north on I-75. The Upper Michigan begins. A area with few people and beautiful country. One day if I live long enough. I will find my peace in the hands of Nature beauty. I like the desire and emotion of this poem. Thank you for a field trip to a good places. A excellent story.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


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We all too often forget what beauty can surround us! Beautiful! xx

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Damn. How did you get inside my head? My thoughts exactly. Except....I'm not sure I entirely believe in the "apocalypse" not in 2012 at least but it still makes you wonder how long we have left on this earth. I've come to learn that everything seems to be connected in one way or another. Even the universe. It's interesting that some tribes actually believe this also and we're all connected with the planet, the universe and what goes on. Before I start really blabbing.....Great write!

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I completely understand this! I love taking a walk through the woods and letting my mind drift. Its the perfect stress reliever. I enjoyed reading through your thoughts and observasions. The visuals were wonderful. Very well written!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A single walk in the woods most times can produce thoughts just like this as long as you willing to see and feel it..x

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TJ
loved this piece, and it is so true. sometimes we lose our appreciation for the natural beauty of nature as we get buried in our modern day conveniences and selfishness, but spending even the smallest amount of time in the presence of the nature beauty that is our world makes us ask the question: "what have we done?"

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it! I love how something so simple causes all of these thoughts to just consume you! This is wonderful: "Simple things. Not so simple thoughts. And beauty beyond the thinking of a single insignificant human." I wish that more people could experience these feelings-the ones that you just described. A lot of people can't see that or feel that.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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hmmmmmmm...this one is like one day in the woods...lol...
but its still amazing!
and there is a kind of peace that reigns on the whole of these stray thoughts!
continue on ondering about those stray thoughts and i will join you soon!
;P

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Very creative, full of insight and thoughts expressed beautifully:)

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