Twisted Tale of Love

Can anything be more sensual and inviting

Than your arms, forever open

And a body, with its unexpected fluctuations of warmth and cold

A wide-spread existence

Inviting me to share all of me

My thoughts and fears

Horrors, Nightmares, Joys and dreams

Some I share

Some I create

Always in the centre of my picture

Sucking out the shackles of exhaustion from me

Reviving the strength that has waned

Naked or clothed

Makes no difference

For I always have

And always be

In a mutual unconditional, surrendering bond of love

With my bed

Author's Note

Now the worst outcome of this poem would be "I saw that coming." Honestly, was there even a tiny bit of surprise in this work? :S

Reviews

[∂αʌ<..]

Sucking out the shackles of exhaustion from me
Reviving the strength that has waned

i can easily relate to this...which makes it brilliantly enjoyable to read!
a little master piece i would say...though i think this poem came in to you in a quite a rush!!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very cool.

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Aw...this poem was so sweet, and I totally didn't see the twist coming at all. I read that last sentence and it literally felt like having a rug pulled out from under me...talk about a splash of reality! Well done!

[LetMeLaughLetMeSing]

That was wonderful~ Great job, I had myself thinking of a person until it snapped into perspective by the last line... xD

[Coyote Poetry]

A bed is where most of us can feel peace and comfort. I like how you told the poem. You gave me a surprise ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Very well written. I love how you tricked us at the end! haha. Great write.

[Poetic Beauty]

I like how you describe things first and then hit us was an ending that we are not expecting. The imagery is great. Well done.

[Helpless]

sometimes we all have similar experiences and feelings, doesnt make it boring or samey when we write it down. i personally thought this was an awesome poem, because it came from the heart. :)

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

The last line definitely took me by surprise and made me laugh out loud! Thanks!

[TJ]

hahaha so surprising! never saw that comin...loved it though bc my bed is like my second favorite thing in the world! and the #1 favorite is my pillow lol