The cloud that weeps

The cloud that weeps

A Story by Enigma
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Stray loose thought about nature.

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Have you ever noticed how beautiful the sky is? It is seemingly boundless, stretches as far as our tiny being can see, and farther than our tiny mind can fathom. It has the same breathtaking quality whether it is the colour of purest blue or when it is dotted with clouds and even when it seems the sky is about to burst and the world is coming to an end. It takes something to find beauty in those monstrous clouds descending towards you and trust me, I never felt smaller and insignificant otherwise. I would stand on the terrace and look at the sky and keep looking till I forget myself. Literally forget myself. The feeling is something close to the loss of individuality. I’m nothing. I’m not those unblinking eyes staring up at the sky, I’m not that mouth hanging open (subconsciously) in awe and wonder, I’m not the tangled locks of brown hair that are wildly blowing in the rough wind, I’m not that skin savouring the sensation of coolness that brushes against me time and again. I don’t exist. All that exists is the sight in front of me. It’s a symbol of that uncontrollable power that exists in nature and no human nor any of its massive instruments can control or surpass. No wonder he has come far in science and research and yet, never before has earth suffered more harm. Now the clouds bring forth a somber mood. They’re grey, sad. The first drizzle is of sorrow as if trying to console the earth and soothe it, ease the pain that seems to get worse every day. The sky weeps. The earth endures. It’s a painful sight. I’m overcome with sympathy. I feel the pain and sorrow of both the sky and the land.

And now comes the storm. The anger that nature unleashes, stemming from its frustration and helplessness, blowing away everything in its path. Destruction? Or cleaning up the place, healing the wounds? Sometimes, the earth, battles for its life. Sometimes.

I’m still standing there, enclosed within my nothingness, observing this exchange of love and care between two lifeless forces, but realizing that they have the power to strike back. I want to join hand with the sky, I want to stop inflicting wounds on something that is the very reason of my existence. I want to be like the sky who always runs parallel to the land and yet, has the heart to sympathize with something he can never reach. I want to be the same. I want to be like that ravaging cloud and use my power to undo the damage, if I can. But the sad truth is that though I have the life, I might not have the power.

© 2011 Enigma


Author's Note

Enigma
So, this started as a poem about a conversation with a stranger. This sure marks the height of getting distracted, hahaha.

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You know even though we can't strike back.. I think deep down on some level the display of the power and forces are for us or to us...then including us within the power grid on earth/universe. I loved reading this..it's a remarkable write.. :) xx And I love the picture..it fits perfectly..x

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The strength and the power of Nature. She had no limit. She can give gifts of water and fresh air. She can destroy a whole city in a few minutes. I like the desire of the poem. To be part of something so powerful and wonderful would be very good. I like the descriptions and the questions raised in this outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the imagery. And your description of yourself ~ "enclosed in nothingness." Oh how we feel so exposed and insignificant in the presence of something so mighty as the sky!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how you describe the sky in this piece. I have many times gazed at the stars and realized how minute I really am in the world. that i am only a grain of sand in the grand scheme of things. It actually gives me a calm feeling.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Simply amazing. loved this.



Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such wonderful imagery and amazing detail.
I enjoyed reading this, I can feel your emotion through out.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You know even though we can't strike back.. I think deep down on some level the display of the power and forces are for us or to us...then including us within the power grid on earth/universe. I loved reading this..it's a remarkable write.. :) xx And I love the picture..it fits perfectly..x

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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