Ever since I turned a blind eye

Ever since I turned a blind eye

A Poem by Enigma

I feel so hollow

So stone-like and cold

Ever since a turned a blind eye

 

To those who seek my help

To those who need my support

To those who feel broken

And badly need me to hold

 

To those who feel incomplete

Without me paying any heed

I turned into a stone

Ever since I turned a blind eye

 

To those few tender hearts

To the many blissful smiles

To the harrowing woes

My guilt stretched on for miles

 

For I lost the care

Once nurtured in my heart

For the one who created me

I turned into a stone

Ever since I turned a blind eye

 

Now I stand here, aloof

Waiting, for nobody

For nothing

Waiting it seems

For the waiting to end

In the crowd

Of my once-upon-a-time friends

I turned into a stone, thrown away

Ever since I turned a blind eye

© 2011 Enigma


Author's Note

Enigma
Experimental write. What do you think?
P.S. - Any suggestions for the title?

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pretty good for an experimental write. i like the subject matter

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well written. Can't think of anything better for a title, but Great write

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it was really good i love the way its was writen good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What about "Turning a blind eye", either way this was still good and you could leave the title as it is I like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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