In Love

Well, another romantic rhyme-filled write, lol...

 I'm loving you, I cannot believe

I'm loving as if this is my destiny

I'm loving and I cannot decide

What to do when you flash that smile

of yours, that spins my head

There's nowhere I'd be instead

To have the guts to say it right

Not to repeat it in my head all night

Just this once, to let you know

I'm in love with you...oh

I'm loving you and everything else

I'm changed, everyone can tell

I'm loving things I hated before

The world seems so much better oh..

Just the sight of you, it spins my head

There's nowhere I'd be instead

To have the guts to say it right

Not to repeat it in my head all night

Just this once, to let you know

I'm in love with you...

That I'm in love with you...

In love with you...yeah

Author's Note

so, umm...did u like it? I originally, sang the first two lines randomly, forgot them, made a fuss then at last wrote all this down. I got a tune for this in my head too, haha

Reviews

[ebur™]

I wanna hear your tune :P I tried singing it to myself XD
Great piece, lovely, and flowed great. Good job :)

[mystic soul]

awesome!!!!!!!! i really liked your romantic rhyming poem... great job!

[chloe cruz]

My god, I loved it! The flow was amazing... and it's perfect for lyrics, too, not just poetry. Hehe, sang it as well. :] *Blows you a kiss.* Great job!

[Erotic Jem]

I really liked this. It would be good to be able to hear it to the tune that you have in mind. Lovely as a poem though. :D