Dreadful Night

I needed to whine out

It was a gentle breeze

That made the time stood still

It made all my sorrows freeze

And I smiled on my own free will

It was a gentle touch

That made me feel so safe

Thought I'd never cry again

But, today

where has the happyness gone

The joy, is it lost forever?

The tears fill my eyes again

the pain is back like ever

I cannot stand this anymore

I'm tired of breaking down

Tired of trying to patch it all up

Tired of looking like a clown

The life mocks me in my face

Everytime I try to smile

It spreads its evil grin

as I desperately strive

Can anyone hear me?

Or look at me now?

I'm as helpless as I can be

How did it hapen? How?

Have I no right to feel good

Or live as if things are right

To not have tears wetting me face

To somehow, get though this dreadful night

Author's Note

I've been feeling down since morning. Having cried my eyes out for more than an hour now, even writing this out didn't help. As you already notice, the piece really sucks big time. It's a pathetic piece of writing, but anyway, thanks for reading it!

Reviews

[*Kantola*]

Aw... it's not pathetic!
I've felt this way a couple of times before... :( Last week, actually. After a series of great weeks it was like BAM... s****y week :(. It's not a pathetic piece, please dont think that. It's as emotion-filled as the rest of your poems! In my opinion, a poem isn't judged by it's content but by the creativity and emotion that was put into it. And Siya, you get a 10/10 for emotion and creativity :)
Hope you start to feel better!!
dun dun dunnnnn :D
-Kantolaaaaaaaa

[Arthur Crow]

Sorry you have been feeling down.. feeling the sorrow in your words which you have expressed so very well in poetic form. Good writing!