I cried

If only you'd come to me

And take me in your arms

Save me from the cold world

Make me feel safe and warm

 

If only you'd look inside me

I that you'll find

A person, not as bad as you thought

A little bit gentle and kind

 

If only you'd hold my hand

And say that you care

Nothing will ever bother me

Not the sarcasms or the stares

 

But you never understood me

You never really tried

And I shut myself into my world

Where I cried and cried and cried...

Author's Note

It's not good, is it?
*sad sigh*

Reviews

[chloe cruz]

Siya! You're always so negative about your work, thinking it's terrible when really, it's not at all. This write was heart-wrenching and so sad... Yet, I loved every piece of it. Really sorry for the short review, I'm in class so... Yeah.

Anyway, again...
Beautiful poem!

Chloe.

"But you never understood me

You never really tried

And I shut myself into my world

Where I cried and cried and cried..."

Such a perfect ending as well...

Hehe.

[barricade]

not bad at all...i really liked it...sad yes...beautifully sad...heartfelt emotions...

"If only you'd hold my hand
And say that you care
Nothing will ever bother me
Not the sarcasms or the stares

But you never understood me
You never really tried
And I shut myself into my world
Where I cried and cried and cried..."

so touching...i know how it is...when you just want someone to see who you are...but they just fail to...when you need someone...and they just aren't there...you call out...but all in vain...

sad but true...

i liked it...great work...
keep it up

regards
barricade...