Old ways

Lyrical write

It's about time

Clock's ticking to nine

Thought seems fine

To make the world mine

And yeah! I gotta say

Anyhow, I start today

Don't mind my way

Don't mind what I say

 

Coz' I say, "Damn! I gonna do it right"

Yeah! I'm gonna win this fight

No matter how long it takes

I'm still gonna stick to my own way...

 

Good old ways don't get me down

I got personalised ride outta this town

With a smirk on my face for those who frown

"Damn! You ain't getting me down!"

Out there, is a world for me to see

Miracles, I wonder I'd never believe

A bunch of friends, or maybe just me

Gonna ride alone, Gonna ride free

 

Coz' I say, "Damn! I gonna do it right"

Yeah! I'm gonna win this fight

No matter how long it takes

I'm still gonna stick to my old way...

Author's Note

How are the rhymes??!!
*fingers crossed*

Reviews

[barricade]

a perfect attitude! a great write! i loved it! the rhyme, the flow... spot on! it's got this spark just waiting to turn into a mighty flame, a fire!
a great piece overall...

regards
barricade...

[Meredith Leigh]

A lot of rhymes, maybe a few too many, but I still liked it.
It flowed well and had an unbeat feel to it.

Good job!

- Kriss

[17thWhitePrince]

haha ... very nice ... forceful almost in fact ... liked it ... it showed spunk ... it showed attitude ... very nice ... not bad :) ... the rhymes in a way make it seem up beat ... the poem doesn't show too much anger all ... it's more implied than it is actually is written in words ... but I like it :)