I wish you'd know

I wish you'd know

A Poem by Enigma
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My version of Backstreet Boys song - "Just want you to know". Must read!! *plz*

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I never really thought that I'd get to say to you

But deep inside I wonder what you'd do

When you get to know how I really feel deep inside

All my stupid wishes, and all the lame fights

But still I wished to hold you so tight

That you'd never ever try to go away...

 

I just want you to know

That I've putting up a fake show

To hide these feelings true

But then there are nights that never end

I wish that I could control

These desires that I'd never show

Stil wishing you'd get to know

How I really feel inside

Just want you to know....

 

All my thoughts are jumbled, I cannot think straight

I wish, out of this, I could find a way

But everything I try, it turns out to be no good

Things are getting messy, but still I carry on

Endless nights give way to lonely dawns

Still I keep it all, keep it all away from you....

 

I just want you to know

That I've putting up a fake show

To hide these feelings true

But then there are nights that never end

I wish that I could control

These desires that I'd never show

Stil wishing you'd get to know

How I really feel inside

I wish you'd  know....

© 2008 Enigma


Author's Note

Enigma
I need to make a few changes so that the lyrics fit in with the song. But anyway, hope you like it... ^_^

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Kt
A couple editorial notes:
2nd stanza, 2nd line - "I've putting" should be either "I've put" or "I'm putting."
2nd stanza, 7th line - "Stil"
(both of these are also in the 4th stanza)

I really like the line "Endless nights give way to lonely dawns." I can really relate to that image.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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