Oh! Why...

Oh! Why...

A Poem by Enigma
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Lolz...stupid and random....

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I'm trying to steady myself

To break away from your charm

Which has settled around me

And gotten thick somehow

Darn! I can't resist you!

I can't stop myself

Just can't stop day-dreaming

About the times we spent

or will spend

together...

Oh! What's happening to me?

Why do I suddenly feel on top of the world?

When I'm with you

Why do I feel rejected

When you're not around

Why can't stay a bit longer

Why can't we share a bit lengthy conversation?

Why can't I control myself??

Oh! why..

Oh! why...

Oh why...

© 2008 Enigma


Author's Note

Enigma
Lolz....
this was pretty stupid, wasn't it??? ^_^

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Nope! this was a cute little piece!
OH! WHY!!!
Oh yeah, exclamation points! WHAT NOW? lol
As for hte poem... it was awesomely cute, and I CAN COMPARE TOO MUCH LOL. Wanting to spend more time with someone... but you CANT :( Or wanting to spend time with someone, and they dont want you to. *sigh*
Wonderful piece, Siya! I WILL READ MORE!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Not stupid in the least! I loved it very creative and a lot of mixed emotions put into it. It souned like it came yourself completely, i love it!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nope! this was a cute little piece!
OH! WHY!!!
Oh yeah, exclamation points! WHAT NOW? lol
As for hte poem... it was awesomely cute, and I CAN COMPARE TOO MUCH LOL. Wanting to spend more time with someone... but you CANT :( Or wanting to spend time with someone, and they dont want you to. *sigh*
Wonderful piece, Siya! I WILL READ MORE!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 3, 2008

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