On their way!!

On their way!!

A Poem by Enigma
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Another sweet song... (read the author's note first)!!!

"

Just give me a second

To put the thought into words

And let them flow all the way

Into your heart

 

Just give me a minute

So I can sort thing out

Just remember the place

From where I am to start

 

Oh! It's not working

I don't know why

Maybe 'cause I'm stumbling

Or because I'm shy

 

But hey! I gonna give it

Just one more try

And try my best to hang in here...

 

ALl the BAM! BOOM! in the crowd

Can't hear you; be a bit more loud

I'm stuttering, why can't I say

But the words are out

They're on their way...

TO YOU! Pull your ears out

Ignore all those calls and shouts

Just listen what I have to say

And let your words be on their way...

 

I'll give you a second

To figure it out

You don't hvae to get it

In a single go

 

I'll wait for a minute

To hear you out

I hope, I pray, I sing

With both my eyes closed

 

And it just don't matter

If we don't say a thing

Our conversation can be done

With the waves and the winks

 

Boy! I really hope

You'll give it a try

Try your best to hang in here...

 

ALl the BAM! BOOM! in the crowd

Can't hear you; be a bit more loud

I'm stuttering, why can't I say

But the words are out

They're on their way...

TO YOU! Pull your ears out

Ignore all those calls and shouts

Just listen what I have to say

And let your words be on their way...

© 2008 Enigma


Author's Note

Enigma
I wrote this imagining a girl and a bot standing opposite each other in a crowded street and trying to talk. They really don't know what to talk about...lolz
I had a hard time with the chorus but I honestly, like the verses. Notice the change in rhymes in the third stanzas....
I hope you enjoyed it!! Will soon post the tune.... ^_^

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Very cute. I can't wait to hear the tune! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


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