Not your place

It's a song....without a tune

Don't think of the times

When you felt alone

When the world crashed down

And there was no more a home

 

Don't think of the times

When you were heavy with pain

When all your hopes and dreams

Were washed down the drain

 

Don't think of the moments

Of vulnerability

Of the sheer despair

And shattered integrity

 

Don't think of those moments

When we weren't so close

But listen coz' I want you to know

 

Of the lives and the times

And our mischievous crimes

When the world still felt alive...with love

I don't care what it takes

Oh! Hell with the stakes

Just listen to me...

No one can take your place...

 

Not your place!

Na... Na...  Not yours...

 

Do think of the times

Those precious gems

We have left behind

Or sewn under the hem

 

Do think of the times

Of all the hugs and smiles

Of our nuisances

And our pathetic fights

 

Do think of those moments

You felt so alive

We strived to reach the stars

We never gave up trying

 

Do think of those moments

When we were so close

I think that now you know....

 

Of the lives and the times

And our mischievous crimes

When the world still felt alive...with love

I don't care what it takes

Oh! Hell with the stakes

Just listen to me...

No one can take your place...

 

Not your place!

Na... Na...  Not yours...

Author's Note

Well, I hope you like it!!

Reviews

[*Kantola*]

This was so cute! =D
Your songs are wonderful... if only you could get a recording of you singing them. =P
Marvelous job, Siya!
Note: the song seemed to just... stop. There really wasnt anything to make you want more. Try adding a little something at the end to make someone go "OH I LOVE THAT". The rest was awesome, just less of a cliffhanger :D
Now I'm off to write some poetry to release all this damn emotion... xD
GJ! I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE!!!

[Wildecat]

This was an awesome write, I felt like I could just sing along, nice write.

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Well I did like this, very much! Your such a talented poet! Good Write.