What you do to me...

One of the best love songs I've ever written... YAY!!!

No! Don't do what you always do to me...

 

Let me keep sitting

Sipping my tea

Don't bring me back

To this reality

Though the dreams have collided

With this world, it seems

Don't do what you do

What you always do to me....

 

I gotta stop looking into those eyes

I gotta stop falling for that cute smile

I gotta shake my head and jump out of this dream

Oh! Don't do what you always do to me...

 

Why can't you be

Like the other guys?

Why I freeze for a second

When you flash your smile?

Why does life without you

Feels incomplete

Oh! Please, I beg

Don't do that to me...

 

I gotta step out now into the world

I gotta start walking and not swirl

I gotta be strong, both at heart and knees

Oh! Don't do what you always do to me...

 

The magic you spin

Feels out of the world

Every second of time

Is now a precious pearl

And I'd never know

What's happened to me

When you do, what you do

What you do to me...

 

I gotta keep my senses and stay upright

Oh! Who am I kidding, I wanna hold you tight

I wanna dance and sing, so that the others can see

What wonders you do, when you do that to me

 

Oh! I gotta keep myself together for a while

When you're around, I can't help but smile

All sweet and confusing, my life now seems

Don't ever stop doing what you do to me...

Author's Note

Honestly, I love this piece of mine. I once wrote something such as this but before I could save it, I accidently closed the window *darn!*
But anyway, I hoped you liked it... ^_^

Reviews

[Angela]

I love this piece, Siya...I wouldn't change a thing. It makes me think of the man I secretly love, and the way my mind and stomach get all tied in knots whenever he's around. We are the best of friends and I just wish I could really tell him how I feel. Such beauty and love in your words. Try and find the right background music to go with it. Great Job!!

[Kelly Catherine.]

I love it. I thought the ideas were adorable and it all seemed to fit together like clockwork. My only suggestion is to check the grammar again. And the "gotta" kinda sounded odd when the rest of the poem seemed so proper. Other than that I really enjoyed it^^

[DeAn]

I love it and your right, it is a great peice of art. you did very good with this. it has good synergy all thru it and the rhymes are very well placed as well as the continuity of the repeating sentences

-DeAn

[AmeliaRose]

i love it too :) i could picture a piano tune in the background the whole time. my favorite lines are "the magic you spin feels out of this world" and of course "what you always do to me"
bravo!