Something

It's another love song *sighs*

I gotta stop chasing the dreams

Those cute smiles and the winks

I know I gotta keep myself together

 

But you make me go nuts

I'm lost amid the if's and but's

Will it end or last forever?

 

I gotta talk it all out

Be it in high-pitched shouts

But I can't keep it all inside

 

You really need to know

What's behind my show

You'll know why it feels so right...

 

So, come on!

What you waiting for?

You know I'll never come up

And say what I feel

Could you...

Be more precise

That'd be nice

It has started to fit in

When you finally told me 'something'

That you felt within you

 

So now, we stand alone

Not wanting to go back home

Is a hug too much to ask?

 

If I just had my way

There'll be hugs, night and day

It ain't so hard a task

 

I won't look at you

Coz' you feel so blue

As if you're run down...oh!

 

But you do look at me

That's where you'll see

A picture that's truly yours...yeah!

 

So, open

Yourself tonight...

Let loose all your emotions

That's you've held inside

Oh! and can you?

Just hold me tight

Be it one last time

It has started to sink in

When you finally tell me 'something'

That we've felt within us...

Author's Note

Hope you all liked that!!

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

this is so wonderfully written ,i just loved every word it has a great rythme too,i know love as wonderful as it is ,there comes the torments the doubts ,all the heartaches,but its just we can not but love,we are humans its in our nature to love and be loved,oh love how cruel you could be,but i just can not keep you away,i want to feel the warmth again in my bones i want to feel alive once again ,you broke my heart a lot but i forgive you and i open my heart to you again and again,come let me feel once more how wonderful you are, oh i just love love poems and love ,there is so little of it these days

[*Kantola*]

This is beautifully written. I can almost imagine/hum the little tune that this goes with. Wonderful job, Siya! Good lord we have so much in common lol.

"But you make me go nuts

I'm lost amid the if's and but's

Will it end or last forever?"

This line completely captured me. It tossed a rope, caught me in it, and pulled me in. THIS WAS THE BEST STANZA!!!! I SWEAR!!! :D
Fantastic job!