I like you (song)

Love...defined once again *sighs*

Look at me

Can't you see it in my eyes

The thing I hide behind my smile

I guess, it'll wash through tears

 

And I

Sit confused over the chair

Wishing that you were here

Holding me tight

 

But it seems too good

To come true

What I feel

I just cant describe

 

And it'll take more than just words

To tell you what goes on inside

Whish spins around

A silly, shocking surprise

To you..

When I say..

That I really like you!

 

So good

To hear you over the phone

And I know, I'm not alone

Though you're only in my dreams

 

It's amazing

When you smile at me

But still fail to see

The real thing

 

And it is too good

To come true

I'll bottle it all up

Deep inside

 

It'll just take a few words

To tell you what goes on inside

The magic that you spin sround

A silly, sweet surprise

For you...

When I admit..

That I like you too...

 

 

Author's Note

OH MY GOSH!! What's happening to me? Why the hell am I writing about romance *shrugs very hard*
Feels like I'm going insane or something...hehehehe
I just had these great lines which I thought I'd share with you all. Hope you enjoyed it and related to it...^_^
Love is so damn confusing, yet, so damn sweet *sigh*

Reviews

[chloe cruz]

Siya you drive me insane! You don't get why you write romance, but your so damn good at it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh and unlike Kantola I did sing. Great job! :D x10

[*Kantola*]

damn you, love!
WE NEED A SINGLE F*****G ANSWER TO YOUR RIDDLE!
This was a merry little tune. And, NO... i promise I didn't sing along to this :P
This would make an enjoyable little song. I would so totally buy the cd that had this track on it. Wonderful job, yet again. Keep on writing! :D

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

'The magic that you spin sround" ----> Around instead of sround...

It sounds like someones falling for someone... Hmmm.... Do i need to get you to the insain assylum? hmm? okay... one more childish thing Syia and somebody sitting in a tree, K I S S I N G First comes love... okay i'm done now...

i like this piece sweetie. It's really cute and it shows how much you have grown as a writer. The flow was great and only a few problems but none stood out enough for me to say where. I could see this being sung by someone so you did a great job on creating a song. Really a Great piece! Good job! My how you've grown lol...

[Lady Lazarus.]

When I admit..
That I like you too....

beautiful beautiful beautiful.
this song is written with such a gentle sweet style.
true love is exactly like this poem.
amazing.