It's gone, it stays

Pretty confusing but interesting enough for a read...^_^

And if you had one more chance

One more choice

To really talk it out with me...

And if you hadn't been right

Even I was wrong!

Why was it hard for us to see?

It could've lasted long

Our friendship song

But you kinda strayed away

And I've waited all night

The phone by my side

Just to hear you say

 

It's gone now

Gone forever

Why look behind and be sad?

Just hold me close..

Let the feelings show

Have the time of our life, oh yeah!

 

Now I'll apologise

To have you by my side

I expect the same from you

Just to know you care

That you'll always be there

No matter what I say or do

Know that I ain't great

You'll sometimes hate

The way I will react

But I'll be there for you

Holding you close

That remains a fact

 

It stays..forever more

The bond of friendship that we share

So go...tell the world

See if I care...

Couldn't feel more free

Couldn't act more wild

But without you, my friend

Life just won't pass by...

Author's Note

To all my dearest friends around the world...
And to the dearest reader of course, hehehe...^_^
Hope you enjoyed it!!!

Reviews

[alternative_be]

Well, I got this read request, just after I had finished a poem of my own. I read your poem and I like it. It tackles all aspects of friendship, in fact it describes what any good friendship should be!
Well done, as I was concentrated on your work and shortly afterwards thinking about sending out read requests for my own work, I noticed I sent some read requests for your poem instead of for my work.
This has never happened to me before!
Well done! You got me distracted in a very positive way!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

This is a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Helen Woodward]

I did enjoy it Siya, you sound happy, bubbly!! This piece has a 'devil may care' attitude that throws caution to the wind...
Nicely done xxx

[brita]

Well done, Siya!
The poem itself is a bit all over the place, but that only adds to its uniqueness! I think it's better that way, because really, that's what friendship is in a nutshell. So many different emotions and feelings all at once, but at the end of the day, it's just so simple. The last stanz really closes it up nicely...
"But without you, my friend

Life just won't pass by..."
Lovely!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Great job. I definetly enjoyed this piece.

Well done.
Rayne

[bluessadmood]

you know i had to come again ,i really liked this writing ,you are a dreamer and a lover to all ,to give love profusely knowing there is so little of it around ,i share the same thinking with you dear ,we give love ,we pretend there is lots around ,everybody will share us the same thinking ,but sadly its not so the way it is,i just loved every word you said,you would love and keep a place for your friends no matter how long they are gone even if forever ,i can go on forever commenting on this beautiful romantic writing,moayad

[bluessadmood]

well that was nice ,really i thought at first you were talking to a lover that passed you by ,but never the less you still hang on and wait for him telling him there is always a warm place for you here and by me ,oh that was so romantic specially after i knew you meant all your friends ,it shows how delicate feelings for them all,and how faithful you are to all ,you are dreamy dear and romantic just like me ,i wish the whole world was like that ,with so much love for there is little of it around,lovely,moayad

[*Kantola*]

awwwww! I LOVED THIS POEM! Friendship and love poems appeal to me the most xD W-HOO!
This was a beautiful poem, and it could also double as a song. Go go repetative chorus, and you've got a masterpiece! hehe
Beautiful poem. It flowed nicely, and I can relate to this poem SO MUCH >.<
Life goes by so slow, yet so fast (with the person) AND you cant live with them or without them. Sounds like a stereotypical husband =P
Wonderful poem, I look forward to more :)

[DeAn]

sometimes it is hard to say exactly how we feel to the person we want to say it to the most. that is why we write it down in the most public place we can find, it shows we have good intentions and we also hope they will stumble on it on there own and see that.

great write.

l8r g8r
-DeAn

[shadadakiya]

very beautiful and heart felt!!