What is it?

What is it?

A Poem by Enigma
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Something romantic I guess...hehehe

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Didn't felt like this before

Don't know myself anymore

Life has turned upside down

The sky seems full of rainbows

 

And as I walk down the street

Trying my best to beat the heat

You appear outta no-where

And my heart skips a beat

 

I don't know what it is?

Yet, it feels so nice

Tell me what you do

Why everytime you make me smile...

 

Nobody can even guess

The true feelings I supress

Keeping it all away inside

Now everything is in a mess

 

But that's how the life goes

No one will ever know

You watch out for when we meet

You'd see a strange glow

 

And I still don't know what it is

Yet, it feels go good

I'll hide away my thoughts for now

Conceal the cupid under a hood

© 2008 Enigma


Author's Note

Enigma
I tried on this one. Hopefully, the rhyme doesn't feel forced over here and the flow is comparatively better...
Oh! Please! Tell me howz it!!??

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I can really relate to this poem... so much stuff going on >.>;
You should always have someone that can make your heart skip a beat, and whoever that person is, keep them near.
This was a beautiful poem. It flowed nicely, and it didn't seem forced at all! I wouldn't change a thing.
Hope life is goin good for ya
Wonderful poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I can really relate to this poem... so much stuff going on >.>;
You should always have someone that can make your heart skip a beat, and whoever that person is, keep them near.
This was a beautiful poem. It flowed nicely, and it didn't seem forced at all! I wouldn't change a thing.
Hope life is goin good for ya
Wonderful poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 11, 2008

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Enigma
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