Me (senryu)

My First senryu!!

So hard to be 'me'

I don't know my own true self

Will I find the answers?

Author's Note

Hey! Hey! My first senryu ever. I hope I didn't get the format wrong...
Just let me know how it is....plz do review!!

Reviews

[*Kantola*]

IDK what a senryu is, but I guess i've got something to google, now :)
I'm guessing its something like a haiku, so i'll just go off of that >.<
THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL for 3 lines of a poem! I find it hard to act my true self around my parents, because my moms all... religious... >.< "DONT SAY A*S OR I'LL WASH YOUR MOUTH OUT WITH SOAP". Hehe... xD Anyway, this was a beautiful 3 lines that can describe most teenagers. I loved it :3

[Kitty]

I LOVE this!!!!!! Describes everything that I keep saying and asking. It's hard to be who 'I' am.

Nicely done!!!!!!!!!!

Josie

[Poeticpiers]

format is fine but as it is about you rather than nature it is a senryu.

Haiku about nature
senryu about human feelings