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A Poem by Enigma
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Lolz...

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It was there all along

How could I ever miss it

And not feel its ecstasy running through my body

This power of love

It's enchanting...

It's soothing...

It's something that I fail to describe

I'm at a loss of words

After all, it's good enough to leave me dumbfounded

© 2008 Enigma


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Enigma
Hmm...I dunno...

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love's sweet contridictions

that's what i'd call it. short, but to the point. these few lines say SOOO much. good job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awsome love poem!! ^^
I think u should call it "confusing love"
It seems like ur telling the readers how much ur confused about the guy u love or something...
Keep writing!!!
~Brittany

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dC-KeoegcHg

Just like the air that I breathe...(this is my title suggestion)

I like this very much!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The poem is excellent. It deserves a title ... Why not: 'Lost for words' or 'Loving Confusion'?

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

polish poet, who died not long ago, a priest Jan Twardowski wrote a poem once and he said in this
"let's hurry to love people, they go away/ pass so quickly"
so my suggestion 'let's hurry to love'

very nice words
Artur

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Hi Siya xx....."Stirrings" that is my suggestion....

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

well written. as far as titles go... how about Realized Love? :P idk, just throwing something out there haha. good poem though. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 13, 2008

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Enigma
Enigma

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