Care

You love me!! You really, really love me!!

Just so that you know

Everybody cares

And to prove that

They needn't just stand and stare

 

Think you're alone

Well, I'd say THINK AGAIN

There are poeple who love you

Your family, your friends!!

 

You say that they hurt you

Or did they, do you know?

It was you who misunderstood

Mistook the truth as a show

 

You sy that they made you cry

But think, was it actually them?

Or did you imagined it all

Ignored the flowers and looked at the dead stem

 

You say that they don't love you

Well, you're highly mistaken

There are ones who'd die for you

Now tell me if you aren't shaken

 

I know, you have you hard times

When the world seems to fall apart

And the ones you love the most

Seem to be tearing up your heart

 

But don't flow away

In this stream of pain

But rather remember the 'good' times

Which happened once and will occur again

 

Don't Life is just a dream

I'd say it's kind of a test

It never gives what you want

But it always gives you what's best...

Author's Note

Lolz...I know. That was a stupid description, I know. It kinda just sprang into my head and I typed it out...^_^
Another postive piece from me. It's like I'm trying to console myself and remind me that I do matter to people (atleast a few of them...)

Reviews

[alternative_be]

Well, you have convinced yourself... Now you need to convince the others! Writing this poem is a good way, because you never know who might read it or who might be online!
You are a positive person, capable of seeing the other side of the medal ... Sometimes things turn out not the way you tought they would be: sometimes for worse, sometimes for better.
I particularly like the way you end your piece:
'Don't Life is just a dream
I'd say it's kind of a test
It never gives what you want
But it always gives you what's best...'

[Brittany DeFranco]

positive arn't we? I love it, I can just hear my friends talking to me lol they always tell me my family care but I don't really think so....maybe if I e-mail u I could tell you instead of saying it on a review lol. Keep writing, I hope to read more of your works of good poetry ^-^
~Brittany

[Face In A Crowd]

I don't really care about descriptions. And of course you matter to people. Who else always says my poetry is great? : '( Your a wonderful writer. Phenominal.