Clouds of Sorrow Pushed Away

OPTIMISM IS SO IN!!

It's raining heavily

From the clouds...

From my eyes...

I can't seem to put an end to it

Even though it hurts 

A lot...

But I just try getting used to it

So I won't feel this pain again

And after a minute or two

Surprisingly, I'm stable again

And the Sun is shining brightly above

The sky is clear and seems full of love

And the birds are singing a happy song

I guess, this is what I always longed for

I push the reasons of my sorrow away

I've had enough for today

And try to sway along with the nature

Which seems to give me peace

Happiness...

Joy...

Everything I need to smile

In the true sense

And I've forgooten why I was crying in the first place

If I wasn't crying

I could've enjoyed this so sooner

It's like the clouds covered me up

And barred me from having fun

In the Sun

But as I said,

'The sky is clear'

As always,

All I needed was

To push those clouds away from my eyes

And remove those thuderous sounds

From my ears

And well, I'm so glad that I did JUST that!!!

Author's Note

I admit. I'm really bad at picking out titles. But I can't help it. ACHCHOOOO!!
Excuse me!! I've got this horrible cold coz' I umm...kinda drank chilled soft-drink when it was cold outside and am suffering since then. Argh! I hate cold...
Whoops! Back to the poem. Well, it's new concept, as you noticed. I'm trying to make optimism one of my good concepts. I'm kinda good at writing sad poems I gues...lolz
Anyways, just enjoy the rain...coz' I can't!.... ACHCHCHOOOOO!!!!

Reviews

[The Mad Prophet]

And remove those thuderous sounds

I love Thuderous sounds, very well writen. I like how you expressed being able to move what your feeling to the side like your done with it. Or very similir to a passing storm. Very well writen.