Friend

About alll I wanna say about friendship...

Be with me through thick and thin

Let me know who I am from within

Just crank on me a joke or two

And know that friends like you are few...

 

Stand beside me and encourage

Whisper from behind when I'm on stage

Needn't appreciate all I say or do

And know that friends like me are few...

 

Talk to me through those tough times

Or simply leave your hand in mine

And forget your troubles for a minute or two

And know that friends like us are few...

 

Author's Note

Ah! I like this piece of mine....
U do too, don't you??

Reviews

[The Mad Prophet]

Very heart felt I will say that. I can see where you are going, and it is writen in such emotion that I can feel what meaning is being convayed. Very well done, keep what friends you have close, because once you leave high school, friends will scatter a bit, and it will get tougher, but new ones will be there.

[W.Piggy]

Hey.
THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM. :) Really nice, and it's so sweet too. The words you use are perfect for the things you explain and it's very meaningful.
Great job. You're really talented. Keep it up. :)

Love,
W.Piggy

[bailish]

I like it a lot. You have a constant theme through the poem that is emphasized by showing from different perspectives. Good job.

BTW, I stole a few images from your home page. Hope you don't mind.

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

I think this is good... you do have a knack for writing poems with friendship in them... if only alot of people had the view you have with friends.... Good write as usual :)

[John Stussy]

i like it, good one as usual Siya! do you specialize in friendship poems? :P you write them extremely well.

[DeAn]

Always do.

great job.

-DeAn