Hopeless

Sad rant...

So many confusions

So much of pain

So much of suffering

And so many red stains

 

So many tears

And so many cries

So much of total s**t

I've held inside

 

So many failures

So many drops

So much of losing

So many flops

 

So little to give

So much to take

So hard to mend

So easy to break

 

So beautiful to love

So sad to be left out

So sad on the inside

So fake when I'm out

 

So many prayers

So many wishes

So many desires

The dreams and the stitches

 

So much of lonliness

So much of sorrow

I now close my eyes

Coz' there is 'no' tomorrow

Author's Note

Gosh! I screwed my grades again!!! I feel so sick of myself. After all the hard work I put into this test...
Grrr.....*sob*

Reviews

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Awww... This makes me want to cry for you!!! Such a sad piece and your emotions are very well told... It's hard when you feel like a failure but you need to realize that you're not... There were some flow problems but all in all it was a good poem...

"So much of total s**t
I've held inside" this didn't seem to flow right maybe "So much total s**t or So much s**t, I've held inside" That "of" doesn't sound right to me...

All in all, i like this... a relatable piece for everyone... good Job!

[Wolfwind Words]

I understand where you come from on this one. It's hard when one tries and puts their all into somthing and it still doens't come out the way the wish.
One can only do their best. Perhaps it's the teachers way of teaching. Have you considered that?

Ether way. Hugs. It's be better.

Your Friend
Infinity's Shadow